This story verged on the very good, but didn't quite get there. The lead character used too much "miracle knowledge" without clearly building up the basis for him being so excellent IMO.
The storyline was good, and I enjoyed reading it. I felt the ending was a little abrupt and could have been developed more.
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Fri, 19 Feb 2010 03:58:24 +0100
Very enjoyable space-mystery.
Sat, 26 Dec 2009 20:03:19 +0100
3 out of 5
This story verged on the very good, but didn't quite get there. The lead character used too much "miracle knowledge" without clearly building up the basis for him being so excellent IMO.
The storyline was good, and I enjoyed reading it. I felt the ending was a little abrupt and could have been developed more.