This story verged on the very good, but didn't quite get there. The lead character used too much "miracle knowledge" without clearly building up the basis for him being so excellent IMO.
The storyline was good, and I enjoyed reading it. I felt the ending was a little abrupt and could have been developed more.
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on Feb 19, 2010 at 03:58
Very enjoyable space-mystery.
on Dec 26, 2009 at 20:03
3 out of 5
This story verged on the very good, but didn't quite get there. The lead character used too much "miracle knowledge" without clearly building up the basis for him being so excellent IMO.
The storyline was good, and I enjoyed reading it. I felt the ending was a little abrupt and could have been developed more.