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Commented on Trilby

swisslemur
swisslemur
Sat, 04 Sep 2010 13:03:10 +0200

nb. it seems to be the name of 'Trilby' that is left out quite often and makes the text appear disjointed and confusing at times.


swisslemur
swisslemur
Sat, 04 Sep 2010 12:49:58 +0200

There appear to be a number of mistakes and missing words in the copy I downloaded to read on my kindle. The writing seems a little confused, but as I haven't read the original I can't be sure if there are other mistakes as well. I was enjoying the story, but missing words became very distracting.