Priehl

Fun read...thanks for such a pleasant (yeah, slightly addictive) first book-read experience on the iPad that I had to, but didn't want to, buy. [For real...] Camera-panning-out-the-window / PG13 comment still bugs me as a real clunker (as in, I would edit it and repost the manuscript; that bad) otherwise I found the approach and humor infectious.

An ending-gambit to consider for your next: introduce an incident as equally fantastic as the one that opened this. End with an ellipsis...