aixaw2002

Finished it. What a wonderful tale. I was hooked from start to finish. I hope you write a sequel someday just to keep hearing about these wonderful characters.

I'm still reading the book and loving every minute of it. It's a great suspense tale and a real page turner. Anyway, I'm posting since now because I've seen two mistakes with names and maybe I'll forget at the end. MAYBE SPOILERS: in those first moments when we first meet Lily, you refer to her as Jean twice. Also when Jean and Jacob go to help the people in the retreat, you refer to Jean as lily twice. That's what I've seen so far. Thanks for sharing your writing with us!

Another new favorite. So far I'm enjoying all the short stories from this author. He keeps you interested until the very end.

This was a very original story. I enjoyed it a lot. I love the way the writer make us get to know the character in not many pages.

Absolutely loved this story. I have a hard time finding books I want to keep reading after a few pages. This time I had a hard time accepting it was over. Not because it didn't have a good ending, but because it was so good I wanted to keep reading. Somehow it
made me think of The Time Travelers Wife. I'm off to download more of your work. Thank you so much for sharing and please keep writing! You're great at it.