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Commented on Surviving the Fog

aixaw2002
aixaw2002
Fri, 25 Sep 2009 21:37:15 +0200

Finished it. What a wonderful tale. I was hooked from start to finish. I hope you write a sequel someday just to keep hearing about these wonderful characters.


aixaw2002
aixaw2002
Fri, 25 Sep 2009 01:19:21 +0200

I'm still reading the book and loving every minute of it. It's a great suspense tale and a real page turner. Anyway, I'm posting since now because I've seen two mistakes with names and maybe I'll forget at the end. MAYBE SPOILERS: in those first moments when we first meet Lily, you refer to her as Jean twice. Also when Jean and Jacob go to help the people in the retreat, you refer to Jean as lily twice. That's what I've seen so far. Thanks for sharing your writing with us!