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Dreaming Lies to Change the Truth

by Kaolin Fire

[620 words] She wove lies of leaves and fruit as she crawled about the tree; it had rotted and split, but her webbing held it whole. She wove eight-faceted apples that glistened like negative prisms, sucking...

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Testing

by Kaolin Fire

[650 words] Six metal walls: floor, ceiling, four lateral barriers to the outside world. Two circular windows face eachother, leading out to bleak darkness. A table sits a little off from the center of the room,...

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The Last to Have Sex

by Kaolin Fire

[2300 words] To put it simply, Jerome was fat. His only erogenous zone was his mouth. But putting it simply didn't do justice to the rolls of flesh he carted around daily, the sheen of sweat that trickled from...

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Commented on Eastern Standard Tribe

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kaolin (3 books)
Fri, 19 Feb 2010 20:50:35 +0100

Great story; a little too easy in the end, perhaps, but I find myself mentioning it a lot given its relevance to, well, my life as a GMTriber in the US. And other such I meet via Twitter, etc.


Commented on Down and Out in the Magic Kingdom

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kaolin (3 books)
Fri, 16 Oct 2009 10:09:50 +0200

I didn't quite get into this as much as I did Little Brother--it was definitely a fun romp, and I can't criticize that. All the same, everything seemed felt a little too easy, and the ending a bit too pat without me really feeling the lynchpin character had enough depth to do what he/she {trying to be spoiler free, here) did (even though I _was_ wondering if it was her/him from around the middle of chapter 2). For that matter, the portrayal of the takeover of "our" society by the Bitchun society,… (more)