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This one was interesting, I especially liked the main character, he was very believable. I'm going to read more of your work. :)

I liked the story, the first paragraph made me want to read it and it was interesting enough to read it. I'm just a bit confused about the ending though. I also noticed that in some places you didn't put the punctuations right, but it was ok. :)

I read the two short stories you published on this site, they were really amazing. It's such a pity that not many people here read them. Please post more if you wrote more. :)

I think this was one of the best short stories I have ever read. Loved the way the character's feeling change so much over such a short story and it's still believeable. It was great. :)

This is the very first thing I am publishing on the Internet (or anywhere for that matter), so any comments would be really appreciated. Thank you. :)