Thanks Alfons, much appreciated.
Have to agree with woundwort regarding the ending. The story and the characters, in my opinion, deserved a lot better. But up until that point this is a superb read, beautifully written with some great characters.
Make sure to read "Sunday Brunch", the final bonus story on this download. It is magnificent!
Part Two is on its way. It's becoming a bit strange...
Agree with bobamac. Think the characters and the subject matter are deserving of a much longer piece of work. But still a very enjoyable read. Thanks
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