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Commented on Violet's Violence (I, II & III)

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garybak
Fri, 18 Jun 2010 08:49:36 +0200

Mesmerising prose. You need to have someone proofread it for you as the odd typo brought me up sharp. The piece remains very promising. You have to write more and more.