Not that i'd want this to turn into an argument but it's called constructive criticism "SirMewt", any real writer would understand the difference. I did enjoy the story and if you ever did continue it I would pay to read it. Some of my favorite authors are the likes of philip k dick and Peter watts so the subject matter is appreciated.
SirMewt, thank you very much for taking the time to leave such an excellent comment. I was really hoping/needing to hear something positive, and you have my appreciation. I'm glad you enjoyed reading NEW FRONTIERS, and I am already thinking through some scenarios for NEW FRONTIERS 2.0!
Again, I appreciate the kind words.
Cheers!
This book like was so amazing man. I finished it in one sitting on my Cliq because once I started I couldn't stop. This stuff is really amazing and I really do hope you continue! Sol-Bucks was really clever! rershaggy is a hater! Fuck I could read this unverse all day! I started reading heavily again from this site on my Cliq because I read this the other day. You should be paid big for these things, as short as it is I would dish out even $15 for it! Keep it up and please please please continue… (more)
This book like was so amazing man. I finished it in one sitting on my Cliq because once I started I couldn't stop. This stuff is really amazing and I really do hope you continue! Sol-Bucks was really clever! rershaggy is a hater! Fuck I could read this unverse all day! I started reading heavily again from this site on my Cliq because I read this the other day. You should be paid big for these things, as short as it is I would dish out even $15 for it! Keep it up and please please please continue with this universel. I'm a writer myself but I just joined to comment on this book. New Frontiers = OWN ALL. I've yet to release a complete book (I horde them for my own enjoyment [cue evil laugh]) but as soon as you do continue this I will read it asap!
Sorry you feel that way, though I appreciate you posting your opinion and taking the time to read my story.
I wrote the ending that way for a couple of reasons. First, it lets the reader imagine what happens afterward. Second, it gives me the opening to continue with it if I should later choose to. As for the store names, there were only the two you mentioned, and I only did that so I wouldn't be using the actual names of the places... and I thought Sol-Bucks was kind of clever...
I'm really disappointed it ended in the most inappropriate time. The story was just starting to get interesting then you ended it. I haven't seen an ending like that since soprano's or shenmue 1. Writing was ok although it gets campy when you make too many faux real world refs. Sol-bucks, your radioshack ref.
You have a good world there add to it, As a short story it seems like when you uploaded it a few chapters disappeared.
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Sun, 04 Apr 2010 08:57:42 +0200
Not that i'd want this to turn into an argument but it's called constructive criticism "SirMewt", any real writer would understand the difference. I did enjoy the story and if you ever did continue it I would pay to read it. Some of my favorite authors are the likes of philip k dick and Peter watts so the subject matter is appreciated.
Thu, 01 Apr 2010 06:03:34 +0200
SirMewt, thank you very much for taking the time to leave such an excellent comment. I was really hoping/needing to hear something positive, and you have my appreciation. I'm glad you enjoyed reading NEW FRONTIERS, and I am already thinking through some scenarios for NEW FRONTIERS 2.0!
Again, I appreciate the kind words.
Cheers!
Wed, 31 Mar 2010 14:41:01 +0200
This book like was so amazing man. I finished it in one sitting on my Cliq because once I started I couldn't stop. This stuff is really amazing and I really do hope you continue! Sol-Bucks was really clever! rershaggy is a hater! Fuck I could read this unverse all day! I started reading heavily again from this site on my Cliq because I read this the other day. You should be paid big for these things, as short as it is I would dish out even $15 for it! Keep it up and please please please continue… (more)
This book like was so amazing man. I finished it in one sitting on my Cliq because once I started I couldn't stop. This stuff is really amazing and I really do hope you continue! Sol-Bucks was really clever! rershaggy is a hater! Fuck I could read this unverse all day! I started reading heavily again from this site on my Cliq because I read this the other day. You should be paid big for these things, as short as it is I would dish out even $15 for it! Keep it up and please please please continue with this universel. I'm a writer myself but I just joined to comment on this book. New Frontiers = OWN ALL. I've yet to release a complete book (I horde them for my own enjoyment [cue evil laugh]) but as soon as you do continue this I will read it asap!
(less)Wed, 24 Mar 2010 17:07:17 +0100
Sorry you feel that way, though I appreciate you posting your opinion and taking the time to read my story.
I wrote the ending that way for a couple of reasons. First, it lets the reader imagine what happens afterward. Second, it gives me the opening to continue with it if I should later choose to. As for the store names, there were only the two you mentioned, and I only did that so I wouldn't be using the actual names of the places... and I thought Sol-Bucks was kind of clever...
Wed, 24 Mar 2010 08:23:57 +0100
I'm really disappointed it ended in the most inappropriate time. The story was just starting to get interesting then you ended it. I haven't seen an ending like that since soprano's or shenmue 1. Writing was ok although it gets campy when you make too many faux real world refs. Sol-bucks, your radioshack ref.
You have a good world there add to it, As a short story it seems like when you uploaded it a few chapters disappeared.
Wed, 17 Mar 2010 03:27:39 +0100
Fixed some errors today, think (hope) that covers all of them...