One man will discover what it is truly like to be created in God's image. He will have the help of a mentor and teacher. He will denounce God. He will slaughter many...
A really good idea and well written but lots of errors in there. It seems to have been written using voice recognition software going by some of the mistakes. Wrong words used and missing punctuation in places. Such things as using "on accident" instead of "by accident", "Man gave you free food" when it should be "God gave you free food" and "There already dead" when it should be "They're already dead".
Simple things but it does ruin what is otherwise a very good story.
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Mon, 28 Mar 2011 03:23:02 +0200
Aside from the previously mentioned spelling/grammar issues, this was a very good read. I usually read hardcore sci-fi but found this enjoyable.
Tue, 06 Jul 2010 09:58:05 +0200
A really good idea and well written but lots of errors in there. It seems to have been written using voice recognition software going by some of the mistakes. Wrong words used and missing punctuation in places. Such things as using "on accident" instead of "by accident", "Man gave you free food" when it should be "God gave you free food" and "There already dead" when it should be "They're already dead".
Simple things but it does ruin what is otherwise a very good story.