That was great! I totally understood the main character, how he felt. You really knew how to get us into the mind of a troubled character! Thanks for the great read :) 4/5
Xxo
Wow, this story was thrilling, tragical and entertaining - really like it. As the others I had also a little trouble in the begnning, but it developed - really like it!
I really enjoyed this but as mentioned by Matte I took a wee whle to get used to the narrative style in the first few pages. IMO, it would be improved with some extra white space between the 'scene shifts' as it takes a while to realise he's no longer talking to person "a" anymore and has moved on to person "b" or "c".
Nice basic plot idea though designed to make you think about how you would react yourself. Thanks!
Yes enjoyed it tho I was not sure during the first few pages. I don't think it would have worked if the author had tried to make it longer. Just right!
Simply amazing and a gripping read, it really strikes me as a movie, to be honest if this was a full story it would be be epic, i would have loved the scences to be more graphic, but an amazing story!
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Sun, 29 May 2011 19:47:50 +0200
That was great! I totally understood the main character, how he felt. You really knew how to get us into the mind of a troubled character! Thanks for the great read :) 4/5
Xxo
Thu, 17 Mar 2011 01:41:38 +0100
Wow, this story was thrilling, tragical and entertaining - really like it. As the others I had also a little trouble in the begnning, but it developed - really like it!
Sat, 05 Mar 2011 09:40:16 +0100
I really enjoyed this but as mentioned by Matte I took a wee whle to get used to the narrative style in the first few pages. IMO, it would be improved with some extra white space between the 'scene shifts' as it takes a while to realise he's no longer talking to person "a" anymore and has moved on to person "b" or "c".
Nice basic plot idea though designed to make you think about how you would react yourself. Thanks!
Sun, 30 Jan 2011 03:29:02 +0100
Yes enjoyed it tho I was not sure during the first few pages. I don't think it would have worked if the author had tried to make it longer. Just right!
Sun, 19 Dec 2010 03:07:45 +0100
Really good, engaging, can't put down short story.
Sun, 07 Nov 2010 09:28:27 +0100
Simply amazing and a gripping read, it really strikes me as a movie, to be honest if this was a full story it would be be epic, i would have loved the scences to be more graphic, but an amazing story!
Wed, 14 Jul 2010 20:23:22 +0200
Have to say an excellent, well written and gripping short story. Could easily see it being turned in to a movie, plenty of emotion.