Worms of the Earth Reburied

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SardoWeems
SardoWeems (2 books)
Fri, 04 Jul 2014 07:25:10 +0200

There are far too many gender errors to make this story readable. Some of the sentences are gibberish. Proofreading it might have helped. I don't understand the purpose of reprinting the story with the sexes switched. The original story is fine, if this story was done correctly, what would be the point?


greylurk
greylurk
Wed, 05 Jan 2011 22:40:46 +0100

While I was intrigued to read this book, it looks like the "author" did nothing more than a search/replace for gender words and replace them with their complement. This ended up being unsuccessful in several spots (i.e. replacing "his" with "her" in a place where "hers" would have been correct or "under her
breath the fellow mumbled ceaselessly as if in invocation"). Thus, I think this is an interesting idea, though poorly executed.