This story was different, a real new idea - so far for me and I really liked the idea of "not able to forget". Also who it develops to the end was really nice and is really thought-provoking!
My sincere thanks Joeychips. I'm grateful to everyone who's taken the time to download and comment on this story. It remains a firm favourite of mine and it's so encouraging the characters have come to mean as much to others as they have to me.
Welcome to Feedbooks mysticalmuse. Endure? You bet!
Nice one Michael. Agree with Joeychips entirely. I remember this one from your website years ago. Good to see it being more widely read on Feedbooks. I have my eye on you. Keep the faith. Endure.
This is a very thought provoking short story and a most excellent read. It's like what if two would-be super heroes had a deep conversation and an unforgettable bond. Thanks for sharing it here. Your talent as a writer is obvious from sentence one.
i love michael graeme's work. everything i look for in a story is there. and it's easy to fall in love with the characters. they are so real. u can officially call me michael graeme's number one fan. ^_^
Mon, 12 Sep 2011 20:54:38 +0200
This is a good story and a quick read.
Tue, 15 Mar 2011 00:14:14 +0100
This story was different, a real new idea - so far for me and I really liked the idea of "not able to forget". Also who it develops to the end was really nice and is really thought-provoking!
Sun, 16 Jan 2011 09:42:18 +0100
Good read and short. keep up the good work and don't let up
Wed, 29 Dec 2010 00:47:25 +0100
Thanks for reading CA, sorry you were a bit let down at the end. I've read your Life Bared BTW. Great stuff, very moving.
Best wishes
Michael
Tue, 21 Dec 2010 05:55:14 +0100
Got me interested with the blurb and I read right through the story, though a bit disappointed at the end. I was hoping for more.
Sun, 28 Nov 2010 01:40:04 +0100
My sincere thanks Joeychips. I'm grateful to everyone who's taken the time to download and comment on this story. It remains a firm favourite of mine and it's so encouraging the characters have come to mean as much to others as they have to me.
Welcome to Feedbooks mysticalmuse. Endure? You bet!
Sun, 28 Nov 2010 01:10:21 +0100
Nice one Michael. Agree with Joeychips entirely. I remember this one from your website years ago. Good to see it being more widely read on Feedbooks. I have my eye on you. Keep the faith. Endure.
Fri, 26 Nov 2010 20:38:19 +0100
This is a very thought provoking short story and a most excellent read. It's like what if two would-be super heroes had a deep conversation and an unforgettable bond. Thanks for sharing it here. Your talent as a writer is obvious from sentence one.
Tue, 12 Oct 2010 21:47:46 +0200
simply amazing!
Mon, 05 Jul 2010 14:52:04 +0200
Really good. Enjoyed that.
Tue, 15 Jun 2010 22:30:09 +0200
Coulde you make it longer?
Wed, 21 Apr 2010 05:09:17 +0200
Great story - I loved the concept.
Mon, 29 Mar 2010 00:32:20 +0200
Erm,... strewth, ire-ocana. Thanks. ;)
Michael.
Sat, 27 Mar 2010 09:35:23 +0100
i love michael graeme's work. everything i look for in a story is there. and it's easy to fall in love with the characters. they are so real. u can officially call me michael graeme's number one fan. ^_^
Tue, 09 Feb 2010 23:58:57 +0100
Thanks mellophobia. You and bobamac have got me wondering now! Glad you enjoyed it.
Best wishes
Michael
Mon, 08 Feb 2010 23:11:14 +0100
Agree with bobamac. Think the characters and the subject matter are deserving of a much longer piece of work. But still a very enjoyable read. Thanks
Thu, 24 Dec 2009 01:13:41 +0100
Thanks bobamac, it's very kind of you to say so. I was fond of those characters too.
Best wishes
Michael
Mon, 21 Dec 2009 05:29:18 +0100
Wow, great read. That book could have been so much longer, i hated for it to end.
Wed, 21 Oct 2009 22:43:53 +0200
Many thanks ixobelle. Awesome comment :)
Wed, 14 Oct 2009 09:49:07 +0200
wah...! Awesome read!