New Year and Resolutions

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mendel.singer (27 books)
Sat, 19 Jan 2013 19:13:57 +0100

A well written witty piece. However after extolling the virtues of physical exercise the story attributes the benefits to giving up cigarettes - a non-sequitir I'm sure you'll agree. The memory lapse does not detract from an otherwise excellent yarn.
The paragraph on the evils of drink looks like an afterthought.

Keep it up your biggest fan Mendel