Oh good grief. I was so excited to read this and as I continued to read, it just dragged on and on. Pick up the pace. Don't bother reading unless you have no other book to read.
The concept behind the story is original, but to be honest there’s so much that could be explored; I would loved to read this as a completed work. I found at times the terms used in erotic scenes were a bit crass, and subtracted from the intensity of the scenes, none the less, an enjoyable read and potentially an amazing book, if they decide to complete the story some day. Cheers for the story!!
I was a bit disappointed it was only a teaser as well. Kind of killed the interest for me when I got to read that much of it only to have the end gone. VERY strange place to cut the book. Overall I thought it was a good story, though it was a bit awkward in a few places. Over all a good read, just wish I hadn't spent an hour reading it to still not know how things turned out.
Was really enjoying the book until I hit the end of the "Demo" and read that if I want to finish the book I need to buy it. I guess I can just get it from the Library if I really want to finish it. Nah. Who uses the library anymore. book a lot more as there were typos and broken sentences throughout.
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Sun, 25 Dec 2011 04:15:35 +0100
Oh good grief. I was so excited to read this and as I continued to read, it just dragged on and on. Pick up the pace. Don't bother reading unless you have no other book to read.
Thu, 21 Oct 2010 22:00:47 +0200
The concept behind the story is original, but to be honest there’s so much that could be explored; I would loved to read this as a completed work. I found at times the terms used in erotic scenes were a bit crass, and subtracted from the intensity of the scenes, none the less, an enjoyable read and potentially an amazing book, if they decide to complete the story some day. Cheers for the story!!
Tue, 15 Jun 2010 22:24:20 +0200
This was great. I finished it a few weeks ago. When will the sequel come out?
Wed, 02 Jun 2010 16:18:52 +0200
I was a bit disappointed it was only a teaser as well. Kind of killed the interest for me when I got to read that much of it only to have the end gone. VERY strange place to cut the book. Overall I thought it was a good story, though it was a bit awkward in a few places. Over all a good read, just wish I hadn't spent an hour reading it to still not know how things turned out.
Tue, 09 Feb 2010 14:33:39 +0100
Was really enjoying the book until I hit the end of the "Demo" and read that if I want to finish the book I need to buy it. I guess I can just get it from the Library if I really want to finish it. Nah. Who uses the library anymore. book a lot more as there were typos and broken sentences throughout.