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A group of employees trying to have a weekend of bonding in the woods. What they get, however, is a weekend of unrelenting terror. What is making them disappear one at a time? Why can't they leave? Will any of them make it back or will all of them end up "Gone?"
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Tue, 03 May 2011 20:39:48 +0200
This was a great story. It could have benefited from a good proof reader but the story crafting itself was excellent. Completely believable characters who helped make the situation believable. Great job.
Sun, 05 Dec 2010 16:50:41 +0100
I really enjoyed this story and it was a great, fast read (on my Stanza app on the iPod touch). With such a buildup and captivating storyline, I was a little worried about the ending, that it might not be able to close the story line well enough. However, I thought the ending was perfect and would love to see it if it ever became a film.
The only criticism on it is there are many, many typos. Not misspellings, just not the word that was intended to be used. While it was distracting, the story… (more)
I really enjoyed this story and it was a great, fast read (on my Stanza app on the iPod touch). With such a buildup and captivating storyline, I was a little worried about the ending, that it might not be able to close the story line well enough. However, I thought the ending was perfect and would love to see it if it ever became a film.
The only criticism on it is there are many, many typos. Not misspellings, just not the word that was intended to be used. While it was distracting, the story was so excellent it made me look past it. I was sucked in and read it all the way through. :)
Truly a great story, thank you for sharing!
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