I thought this was an interesting lead in to a story. Rosie could become quite complex. What happened to Roger, did she really eat him? So is she a Vampire, Werewolf or a just another Psycho?
Everyone things that Roger is a loser, including Rosie. But she takes him home anyway with no reason? The story could be decent with some character development. Right now, it seems like more of an outline.
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Wed, 24 Nov 2010 16:31:12 +0100
I thought this was an interesting lead in to a story. Rosie could become quite complex. What happened to Roger, did she really eat him? So is she a Vampire, Werewolf or a just another Psycho?
Wed, 23 Jun 2010 18:03:08 +0200
Everyone things that Roger is a loser, including Rosie. But she takes him home anyway with no reason? The story could be decent with some character development. Right now, it seems like more of an outline.