1,794 words (≈ 7 minutes)
Rosie dresses as "Little Red Riding Hood, all growed up" for a party at an exclusive adults' club. Roger dresses as the wolf. When they meet... sparks don't exactly fly. This isn't a romance or erotic fiction, but it DOES contain adult themes. Consider yourself warned. :-)
Language: English
Written in: 2009
Published: 2009-08-16
Word count: 1,794 words (≈ 7 minutes)
www.mobileread.com CD Clement (Peverel on MR) Wesley Allison (HistoryWes on MR) Jeffrey A. Carver (starrigger on MR) www.starrigger.net Jeff Inlo (jinlo...
Wed, 24 Nov 2010 16:31:12 +0100
I thought this was an interesting lead in to a story. Rosie could become quite complex. What happened to Roger, did she really eat him? So is she a Vampire, Werewolf or a just another Psycho?
Wed, 23 Jun 2010 18:03:08 +0200
Everyone things that Roger is a loser, including Rosie. But she takes him home anyway with no reason? The story could be decent with some character development. Right now, it seems like more of an outline.