San Saba

It already looks a lot better. One final advice though: don't manually indent paragraphs.

I have formatted the book into chapters. Please enjoy!

Rather than pasting the whole book into a single block of text, you need to create chapters and paste the text for each chapter.

Hi, I am a new author and would appreciate all comments good and bad. I also am sorry in advance that the book is not well formatted for ebooks. I am working on that. Also there will be small errors in editing. This was the first draft.

Thanks in advance...for the forum and .. interest.

hadrien yes it is poorly edited. i am still figuring out how to use their upload interface. I will have it corrected soon. My initial comment was a test so I could see a comment. That being said of course I loved it. thanks for your comments.

Dear Mr. Eichenberg,

I have a blog, Online Novels, http://online-novels.blogspot.com/, with the names, descriptions and web addresses of several hundred free novels available on the internet; please let me know if I may include a link to your book, San Saba.

Thank you.

Sincerely, Susan Crealock
online.novels@gmail.com

You loved your own book ?
It's pretty badly edited: instead of a single block of text, this should be divided into chapters.

I loved it