Incredibly poorly paced with overly verbose descriptions of minor situational details that do not flesh out the characters or plot and the ending feels tacked on. There is a good story in there somewhere but it needs a damn good editor and a complete rewrite.
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Sat, 05 Feb 2011 09:05:14 +0100
Incredibly poorly paced with overly verbose descriptions of minor situational details that do not flesh out the characters or plot and the ending feels tacked on. There is a good story in there somewhere but it needs a damn good editor and a complete rewrite.