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FREE second in series novel that neatly fits in the sci fi / fantasy / horror/ mystery/ suspense /alternate history genre. Scalp Bounty: Ravaging Myths Book 2 begins in the Apache Nation with the mysterious death of an Apache soldier. The death rocks the Intertribal Council and the Apache Tribe Council representative, General Andrea Cochise of the Apache Nation military is determined to track the killer down.
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Sat, 05 Feb 2011 09:05:14 +0100
Incredibly poorly paced with overly verbose descriptions of minor situational details that do not flesh out the characters or plot and the ending feels tacked on. There is a good story in there somewhere but it needs a damn good editor and a complete rewrite.