The Decisive Moment

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Snow
Snow (1 book)
Sat, 02 Jan 2010 19:12:23 +0100

I liked the story, the first paragraph made me want to read it and it was interesting enough to read it. I'm just a bit confused about the ending though. I also noticed that in some places you didn't put the punctuations right, but it was ok. :)

Missmichelle
Missmichelle (2 books)
Wed, 30 Dec 2009 18:52:27 +0100

woohoo my first published work :P