1,818 words (≈ 7 minutes)
I wrote this short story a few years ago for english homework and really enjoyed it so I decided to publish it to see what people think of it. This short story is approx 1800 words long, give or take. Its my first time doing this so please dont be too harsh.
Language: English
Written in: 2009
Published: 2009-12-30
Word count: 1,818 words (≈ 7 minutes)
Tags: teens, friends, peer pressure, school, fiction
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Sat, 02 Jan 2010 19:12:23 +0100
I liked the story, the first paragraph made me want to read it and it was interesting enough to read it. I'm just a bit confused about the ending though. I also noticed that in some places you didn't put the punctuations right, but it was ok. :)
Wed, 30 Dec 2009 18:52:27 +0100
woohoo my first published work :P